Undo

I wish I could

Undo it all

Un-hear your voice

Un-see your face

Un-feel your touch

Undo it all

Undo us

But do I really?

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  1. Something that we’ve all felt and wonderfully expressed, Zareenn. The final words are ones that may never be answered.

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    1. For readers to relate to my writing, that’s something I have always wanted. I’m glad it means something to you.
      Very true, sometimes, most times it’s very ambiguous. But then again, we can never be sure about anything can we.

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      1. True, plus I find that leaving things ambiguous leaves plenty of room for interpretation among readers or listeners (in the case of music). That opens up your composition to a broader audience.

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        1. It does. It can end however you want it to.

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        2. I build stories in my head all the time. If I would tell you, you would think I’m psycho.

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          1. I’m all ears! Do tell! 🙂

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            1. I think about all these random stories. Encounters with strangers, complete fictional characters born out of imagination and vivid stories of what happens and not. I could write a novel but I can’t seem to concentrate long enough.

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              1. You can write short stories and publish them on your blog. Then, you’d have a series of short stories that maybe you can publish as an anthology?

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                1. I guess I could. Just that I am used to writing sarcasm here. Not lovely dovey stories.

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                  1. It’s good to mix things up. You’re very good at what you write.

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                    1. I will think about it.
                      I try very hard, haha.

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  2. Zareen! There’s more than sarcasm you can write! *-*

    I loved this piece. I guess I’m not the only one to feel this way.

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    1. I’m happy you enjoyed it. That was the intention.

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  3. this is such amazing and beautiful words…

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    1. Thank you for such positive feedback 🙂

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  4. Ugh. Hit me straight in the feels with this one 😥

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    1. Also, WHEN DID YOUR BLOG GET A MAKEOVER?! *_*

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      1. It has been a while..

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        1. Ugh. I haven’t been stalking you (or anyone) enough of late. Chalo, now I gotta up my blog stalking game.

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